The Ageing Process

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Yorkie
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 13
Joined: Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:46 am
Location: Yorkshire

The Ageing Process

Post by Yorkie » Sun Nov 20, 2011 5:38 pm

Hi all, I can't sleep and as usual words are running round in my head LOL. I hope you enjoy my poem and that it gives you a giggle :mrgreen: xxxx

THE AGEING PROCESS

Aches and pains, joints a creaking
Driving me insane
Knees go crack, hips dislodge
I’m walking like John Wayne!

Lines and wrinkles, needs some filler
These creases need to go
I also need a miracle cure
For the pain in my big toe!

Tits headed south, hair’s gone thin
My arse has got too fat
Eyes can’t see much anymore
I’m almost blind as a bat!

My hearings gone I need an aid
And now the battery died
This age that’s creeping up on me
I really can’t abide!

Why we strive to be old
When we have such youth
I guess I need to realise
I’m too long in the tooth!

stevehawk
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 19
Joined: Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:15 am
Location: Scotland

Re: The Ageing Process

Post by stevehawk » Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:48 pm

I liked the simplicity of this poem, but u lost the rhythm in the last stanza i think,
very funny and sadly true, well done.

Steve

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