短歌 Tanka

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短歌 Tanka

Post by inspired8 » Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:26 pm

夜 変わった 
黒い 深い は
莫大 には
精神 入って いない
不景気 盗んだ




yoru kawatte
kuroi fukai wa
bakudai niwa
seishin haitte inai
fukeiki nusunde






turns nightfall
the dark deep
as vastness of
an empty soul
depression steals
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Re: 短歌 Tanka

Post by heinzs » Sat Mar 07, 2009 5:32 pm

I'm glad I have international language characters loaded. I like the way it looks and sounds in its original, and the translation is great as well.

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