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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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Post by inspired8 » Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:33 am

Siege of endless

Battles forgot

Wielding merciless

Passions fought


Walls before

Overcome

Battered torn

Hearts succumb


Victory or defeat

Losing more of

Waging internally

Siege for love...


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Post by Cyan » Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:17 pm

as the sea of your avatar..

your poetry suggest a greater mass, a combined idea beyond the surface.

words of waves.. each somehow connected to the sea, but moving individually towards the end.. chaotic and indiscriminant. The whole perhaps lost in the individual.
"in the bright light of day and even in the happiest moments of our waking spirit we are ordered around a little by the habits of our dreams."
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