alliterating
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alliterating
Alliterating
Alliterations always abound
Big bountiful bunches
Careen carelessly constantly
Dancing. Doting dictations
Extracted exquisitely eloquently
Falling free from
Gordy’s grand gardenesque
Heart, his hand
Inscribes ink inklings
Jotting jolly jingles
Knitting, kneading knifing
Love letters lovely
Musical musings maybe
Not necessarily neat
Or orderly only
Pure personal ponderings
Questions quietly quoted
Restless ramblings recorded
Silent screaming syllables
Tossed together triumphantly
Unique unions unleashed
Vibrant victorious verses
Whispering while wailing
Exuberant exaltations exclaiming
Youthfulness yet yearning
Zestfully zigging-n zagging
[ 08-06-2002: Message edited by: gordy ]
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Alliterations always abound
Big bountiful bunches
Careen carelessly constantly
Dancing. Doting dictations
Extracted exquisitely eloquently
Falling free from
Gordy’s grand gardenesque
Heart, his hand
Inscribes ink inklings
Jotting jolly jingles
Knitting, kneading knifing
Love letters lovely
Musical musings maybe
Not necessarily neat
Or orderly only
Pure personal ponderings
Questions quietly quoted
Restless ramblings recorded
Silent screaming syllables
Tossed together triumphantly
Unique unions unleashed
Vibrant victorious verses
Whispering while wailing
Exuberant exaltations exclaiming
Youthfulness yet yearning
Zestfully zigging-n zagging
[ 08-06-2002: Message edited by: gordy ]
[ 08-07-2002: Message edited by: gordy ]</p>
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hey gordy..this is so great!..i love that its not just an ABC poem..it has meaning and tells a story..has depth and insight..how did you get to be sooooo talented anyway, huh huh??..lol..
seriously now, i really enjoyed this one... [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
[ 08-07-2002: Message edited by: Valarie Vandegriff ]</p>
seriously now, i really enjoyed this one... [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
[ 08-07-2002: Message edited by: Valarie Vandegriff ]</p>
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Hahahaaaahaaha, oh, Gordy, this IS a masterpiece of alliteration! I especially like:
Extracted exquisitely eloquently
Falling free from
Gordy’s grand gardenesque
Heart, his hand
Inscribes ink inklings
Jotting jolly jingles
Knitting, kneading knifing
and then the tension builds, craziness abounds, crashings and
Silent screaming syllables
Tossed together triumphantly
Unique unions unleashed
Vibrant victorious verses
Whispering while wailing
Exuberant exaltations exclaiming
Youthfulness yet yearning
Zestfully zigging-n zagging
I love it, and your spirit, Gordy!! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
Extracted exquisitely eloquently
Falling free from
Gordy’s grand gardenesque
Heart, his hand
Inscribes ink inklings
Jotting jolly jingles
Knitting, kneading knifing
and then the tension builds, craziness abounds, crashings and
Silent screaming syllables
Tossed together triumphantly
Unique unions unleashed
Vibrant victorious verses
Whispering while wailing
Exuberant exaltations exclaiming
Youthfulness yet yearning
Zestfully zigging-n zagging
I love it, and your spirit, Gordy!! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
alliterating
thank you very much, i thought i would get more comments on this one cuz i kinda worked on it more but it seems like the ones i just zip off in ten minutes or less get the most reaction and the ones (like this one) that i spend a while on, i have to keep gordying and gordying to get any comments! lol oh well i just need to get over it...lol...thanks for the kind words... [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]
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don't know how i missed it the first time... when i got done reading i realized it was the first really 'fun' poem i've read in a while. made me feel pretty lighthearted. i'd probably even add 'zen' as a last word, as a comment. [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]
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cool poem
"Restless ramblings recorded"
i also like similes ... subtle semblances of similarities
metaphors are nice too
"Restless ramblings recorded"
i also like similes ... subtle semblances of similarities
metaphors are nice too
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Re: alliterating
Alliteration always amuses
Artistically aspiring
Alphabetic alliteration
applause and admiration
are apt and awarded
Artistically aspiring
Alphabetic alliteration
applause and admiration
are apt and awarded
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Re: alliterating
absolutely awesome
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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Re: alliterating
love it gordy.
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”
-Jack Kerouac-
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Re: alliterating
thanks
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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