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shellspace71
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 9
Joined: Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:31 pm
Location: Zeeland, MI

Gone

Post by shellspace71 » Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:43 pm

Extincton of exisitance

if I ceased to be

would you notice, give pause

or go along your way.

I am convinced it would not matter

I think you would not blink

I am insignificant, a curiosity.

You have it all, your life filled full

of all you want and need

I take my leave, my conscience clean

I did not mean a thing.

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Mpumelelo Rantsolase
Clearwater Poet
Posts: 39
Joined: Wed Dec 19, 2001 12:01 am
Location: South Africa

Re: Gone

Post by Mpumelelo Rantsolase » Mon Oct 12, 2009 6:01 am

Wow this one felt like a stinging blow, how many people do we ignore everyday and all they want is to be acknowledged.

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audiofool
Blue Sea Poet
Posts: 598
Joined: Tue Oct 06, 2009 4:35 am
Location: Michigan

Re: Gone

Post by audiofool » Thu Jan 25, 2018 11:19 pm

Amazing poem. I am stung. :thumbsup:

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Travis
The Transformed One
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Joined: Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:31 pm
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Location: North Eastern, IN
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Re: Gone

Post by Travis » Tue Jul 31, 2018 1:22 pm

Very nicely written! I felt the sting!! :wink:

~Travis
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