Raindrops of soul fall deep
Within thought of these times
Yet, ever memory, I cherish
I keep
Nothing has ever strayed my vigilance
To admiring the beauty of creation
Thoughts stand up, and dance
Inside the realization.
My Lord gave his life for me
Every drop of blood
Every cry of pain
By some, misunderstood
He took all the blame
Captured in thought, He did this for all
He might have risen from the grave
Still, the fact is He took it for us. The fall
Trenching on for the brave
My Lord gave it all
For one reason
So We
Would not fall.
Tears of the Heart
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- negatvone
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Tears of the Heart
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
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Re: Tears of the Heart
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Tears of the Heart
my friend, Why have I not read you before! Because you have a wonderfully unique way of expressing yourself. Your opening lines of this poem Raindrops of soul fall deep...." is very poetic and beautiful. Also, I am in awe of your lines ""Thoughts stand up and dance..." (as you are admiring the beauty of God's creation, is a unique way you have with words. And what Christ did for us, you get it! How true that He took the fall for us. Excellent writing on an excellent subject. I hope to read more of your poems. Blessings, Darlene
"Poetry is what in a poem makes your toenails twinkle."----Dylan Thomas
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- negatvone
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Re: Tears of the Heart
I've been on Hiatus. I'm getting my groove back. TY.
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
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