well, I'm craven
and I'm cold
always doing
as I'm told
more or less
halfheartedly
punching
the clock
in my blue
argyle socks
gazing at you
contentedly
you're more
than a desk clerk
if I were more
of a knee-jerk
kind of guy
I'd move beyond
the pleasantries
offer up
the possibilities
but why deny
I'm going home
alone
you're a dream
in black and red
here I'm used to
playing dead
grinding out
the 8 to 5
your form keeps
my corpse alive
so I'll muddle
on through
plans for me
including you
on my mind
consistently
pleasing the man
in the chair
does he know
and should I care?
my guess
I'm late history
I'm going home
alone
If I could summon
up the nerve
all the things
that you deserve
wait and see
I'll treat you to
the finer things
designer shoes
and diamond rings
high society
you're a vision
from above
in leather
I'm in love
passion proves
the case
fate is written
on your face
We're going home.
Playing Dead
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- Moushka
- Blue Sea Poet
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Re: Playing Dead
That's great! Love the ending. Incentive.
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
- negatvone
- Deranged Marshmallow; Leader of The Twin
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Re: Playing Dead
My dear God. This well penned.
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
Re: Playing Dead
Thanks, Moushka. Thank you, negatvone.
Re: Playing Dead
Ah,...unrequited love. One of life'r Rites of passage. Enjoyed.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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March 2011
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
Poet of the Month
March 2011
Re: Playing Dead
Thanks, bags.
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