Dazzling rays of sunlight
Catch my eye
Reflecting shadows
Wisp of vapor
Blown away
Silky summer moonlight
Ghostly silver
Ripples on water
Playing hide and seek
Wave after wave
Dim glow of the candle
Illuminating nothing
Flickers on the wall
Dancing to music
Only it can hear
The fire so warm
A denouement
A pirouette
To coda, allegretto
Why am I so cold?
A Play of Light
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Re: A Play of Light
Beautifully poignant, Lisa. Very moving.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: A Play of Light
wonderful job
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?
---Todd Agnew
Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword
---Gordy
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Re: A Play of Light
Thank you!
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Re: A Play of Light
Beautifully written. short with mind piercing imagery
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