The Song
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Re: The Song
What a joy to read this one again....and for some reason today it revealed to me an even deeper meaning...yes the world is beautiful even in our darkest days..love this one sooooooooooo much Eternum 1
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Wow,...how did I miss this oldie? Very lyrical piece my friend. Lovely meter, thoughts well expressed, good use of rhyme. Normally, you've written in more of a free verse type of style. Haven't you?
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Appreciate your comments, my friend. I like to mix things up poetically and lyricallybags123 wrote:Wow,...how did I miss this oldie? Very lyrical piece my friend. Lovely meter, thoughts well expressed, good use of rhyme. Normally, you've written in more of a free verse type of style. Haven't you?
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I would have given Eternum one of those bages!
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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I find it quite exciting to be able to read these poems of yours ET and find such new meaning ,,and looking back it is obvious I found even different meaning in this one a while back. I always did enjoy your writing's ET....a talent born in you for sure.Debbie wrote:What a joy to read this one again....and for some reason today it revealed to me an even deeper meaning...yes the world is beautiful even in our darkest days..love this one sooooooooooo much Eternum 1
Reach Out And Love Someone
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Beautiful lyrics which only a poet can write! Don't know how I missed it except that I don't often look in this forum not being particularly spiritual which I admit is often my loss.
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A bagel or a badge?Jade wrote:I would have given Eternum one of those bages!
If it's a bagel, can I have with cold smoked salmon and some cream cheese?
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Thanque my dear.Debbie wrote:I find it quite exciting to be able to read these poems of yours ET and find such new meaning ,,and looking back it is obvious I found even different meaning in this one a while back. I always did enjoy your writing's ET....a talent born in you for sure.Debbie wrote:What a joy to read this one again....and for some reason today it revealed to me an even deeper meaning...yes the world is beautiful even in our darkest days..love this one sooooooooooo much Eternum 1
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Bruno wrote:Beautiful lyrics which only a poet can write! Don't know how I missed it except that I don't often look in this forum not being particularly spiritual which I admit is often my loss.
If you understand beauty then you are as spiritual as anyone...in my estimation.
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No its a badge for the talented! Feel special! lol
and yea, hey, somebody get Eternum a bagel while you're at it.
and yea, hey, somebody get Eternum a bagel while you're at it.
aimed with angry art,
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but it's silence that breaks the heart
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There are fresh bagels in the pantry, he can get his own. The shmeer is in the fridge.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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I just put a sixer of shmeer in the fridge and replaced the bagels with some rolls and cold smoked lox along with some local made cream cheese, Also some thin sliced prosciutto ham to wrap the fresh cooked shrimp in and some California avocado sushi rolls and a big fat dill pickle for a chaser.
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you posted it on the
Poetrypages.com group
on Facebook. Loved it
then and I still love it
Now. Very nice!!
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Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
Death will be your final victory over life
Rejoice, for victory comes even as you live
Spread your arms and embrace the future
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