A Day Of Learning

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Lonnie
Clearwater Poet
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A Day Of Learning

Post by Lonnie » Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:32 am

A Day Of Learning



Dandelion seed floating free
borne by what we never see
I often wish it could be me
just to ease my pain

Translucent wing of dragonfly
oft has caught my lazy eye
as I gazed at summer sky
wishing for a rain

Silken strand of spider weave
stronger than you might believe
took no Einstein to conceive
yet fascinates my mind

Caterpillar soft and slow
caring not which way to go
crawls across my hand to show
that even bugs are kind

Raindrop falling to the ground
makes no fundamental sound
yet tells me there are more around
and I rise to go

All of this has made me see
that it is something just to be
and even my humanity
is more than I can know


C. Lon R. Bruso
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goldenrod
Babbling Brook Poet
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Re: A Day Of Learning

Post by goldenrod » Tue Jul 31, 2012 10:42 am

A pleasure to read! :grin:
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Lonnie
Clearwater Poet
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Location: North Carolina

Re: A Day Of Learning

Post by Lonnie » Tue Jul 31, 2012 4:15 pm

My thanks to you!

I thought I would post something a little more positive for a change!
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Travis
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Re: A Day Of Learning

Post by Travis » Mon Aug 06, 2012 5:19 pm

I liked this...it flowed very well...great images...nice! :thumbsup:

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Lonnie
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Re: A Day Of Learning

Post by Lonnie » Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:37 pm

Thanks, Travis! Glad you enjoyed it!
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