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Mystified
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tear

Post by Mystified » Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:01 am

it was building for so long
reacting to her
the emotions grew
swelled to a peak

each thought gave it
more momentum
she allowed just one
and it fell

slowly
it ran out
down the slope
of her nose
it glided with ease
across her cheek

as fast as it appeared
it was gone
one swipe
now it rests
forever more
upon anothers hand
within her lovers
heart
"It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not!" - Unknown

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Re: tear

Post by TBunsie » Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:58 pm

I love when I read it, I could actually picture it happening and feel it.

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Re: tear

Post by bradj » Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:24 am

Great last verse, I'm searching this forum for inspiration and i think you may have just squeezed an idea out of me.

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Re: tear

Post by Mystified » Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:54 am

My thanks to both of you.. I am glad you enjoyed reading..
"It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not!" - Unknown

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Re: tear

Post by moonflower » Sat May 08, 2010 10:51 am

this is truly beautiful Mystified..i too could 'feel' the tear as it formed and fell..a lovely poem! :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: tear

Post by purplelionness » Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:01 pm

live in the moment, as the moment is fleeting :crying:

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