whispers

[Joehanna]

i am whispering
my words
into your ear
i am true
in front of you
but you don’t hear
you hold my hand
but you don’t see me

i am whispering
my words into your ear
and i am not anymore
the air you breathe

[nekot]

This sounds like it could be a song Joehanna.

The piece leaves me with an empowering feel - no longer being the one for the other, who can't see me, to use.

[Joehanna]

Thank you

[moonflower]

very poignant and emotional..well written!..enjoyed

[Joehanna]

Thank you

[Tony Fiona]

wonderful expression of
when one is taken for granted
one exists and the other fades away.

[Joehanna]

Thank you

[Debbie]

life is so like that..we talk all the while not hearing a word being said..well put dear heart

[Joehanna]

Thank you

[karanamrao]

I like the way the pithy and cryptic expression is carried through the conduits of electrifying images.It's surely a rare gift that a poet is endowed with.Please keep it up-the verve and gusto of writing poetry till the muse exhausts you.My congrats for your stupendous achievement.

Dr Karana Rao

[Joehanna]

Thank you

[BeeJay]

Poignant and lost but reaching out ...still. Great stuff is often packaged in the garb of simplicity.__BeeJay

[Joehanna]

Thank you

[Laverne Pacquire]

i am whispering
my words into your ear
and i am not anymore
the air you breathe

beautiful feeling and emotion, these lines contrast the rest of the poem.

I enjoyed the read.

[Joehanna]

Thank you:)