Hide and Seek
Looking always looking, searching inside, searching the tide through watery eyes
scanning the skies floating over truth skipping over clouded lies
looking always looking, someone tell me why.
Lost , so lost in the black following the smell of blood and lilac,
hands outreached ready to turn back, imagin that.
Lost, so lost in the black,
looking always looking, find me please, find me blindly crawling through the fog
choking on the smog of confusion and this delusion never seems to end
constantly pondering when, when will someone save me,
maybe soon, go north follow the moon.
Don't leave, I'm here, hear me whispering..... do you hear the wind whistling?
She was here....
here so long....
hide and seek......now shes gone
Can you? Will you?.....find me.
Hide and Seek
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An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Hide and Seek
A good piece of pondering poetry. Well done Queen. Personally,...I think we have to find ourselves before there's any chance of other's finding us, but I understand what you mean. It's all so confusing out there isn't it?
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: Hide and Seek
Soft skies hold creatures still as scented death a verse gone cold
Last edited by wblogan on Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Hide and Seek
thank you as always bags, as soon as i think i have really found my self, that crazy b*tch in the mirror changes again!
Wblogan, your word make me search as much as the feeling in my poem!
Wblogan, your word make me search as much as the feeling in my poem!
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
Re: Hide and Seek
Loved this. It feels like loss. Maybe I'm reading something that you did not mean to say, but I heard it anyway.
Re: Hide and Seek
actually it's about me feeling like i'm constantly explaing myself to people. sometime i just wish someone would get "me"
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