there are days.........................................................i
am not agile in,
seagull days,
only they can master.
higher then light soaring ....the wind....................................as i
limpingfrozenburning:
with,salt,andshell,anddriftedwood,
stand discarded
in the tidal plastic(dreaming.............
i knew you once..................................................birds close to God
i knew and flew wing to wing among you brothers),
but how small in your view
is a
single
grain
o
f
s
a
n
d
.
seagull days
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Re: seagull days
creative.
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
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Re: seagull days
the format you used in this is really interesting, i like parts of it and other parts seem a little cluttered, but there are some great lines here :)
i really liked that stanza.limpingfrozenburning:
with,salt,andshell,anddriftedwood,
stand discarded
in the tidal plastic(dreaming.............
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”
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