Unloved

[Black Star Shine]

How could a boy love someone so imperfect?
with all the wrong blemishes
like zits and sun scars
someone who stands on unstable battel ground
and strives to be noticed but once
who cant fit in the 'small' the world demands
who's cottage cheese legs dont appeal to the miniskirt
with crooked teeth and unfocoused eyes
with hands bigger then mans
and 'big foot' left feet
how could a boy love osmone so insane?
who wears unmatching socks
and talks to herself in the quietest hours
who writes unread tears
and sheds giggles like there's no tomorrow
who gets called the fruitcake freak behind her back
who sings unearthed songs
and smokes others emotions
who is loud, crazy, and obnoxious
how could a boy love someone so unpretty?
how could a boy love someone so different?
how could a boy love me...

[Tom Watson]

Ah, but love is found in the heart, not in the shell. Your writings reveal a heart as big as any I have seen here and regardless of any outward appearances (or your thinking about those appearances) your true beauty comes from your heart and when that is revealed, who could resist?
A well written poem.

Tom

[Black Star Shine]

thank you Tom, that really made my day

[Mellen12]

Many of us go through life thinking we aren't good enough or pretty enough for someone to love us. But this isn't the case, give yourself more credit. You are a beautiful soul (which is most certainly shown in your poems!!) SO KEEP SHINING!!!!

[poeticpiers]

Nature in her wisdom decreed we should all be unique but that some one would find us the answer to their dreams. Beautiful people are too bust being beautiful to be real people

[wadley gurl]

thats really powerful.i can so relate to that.