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Autoprune 12 months.
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Autoprune 12 months.
- psychotic pretender
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Pick my heart up gently
Like its made of glass
Sit down slowly
Unfold the past
Show my true colors
Does my blood run red
Your touching me
Enough said
Yet still you delve
Into my secret truth
No boundaries known
Gaze at my youth
Watch me triumph
See me fall
Hear my desires
Embrace them all
Shed light on my pain
Heal a wound
Fall to your knees
Bring about my doom
Pick my heart up gently
It is made of glass
Sit down slowly
don’t shatter my past
Like its made of glass
Sit down slowly
Unfold the past
Show my true colors
Does my blood run red
Your touching me
Enough said
Yet still you delve
Into my secret truth
No boundaries known
Gaze at my youth
Watch me triumph
See me fall
Hear my desires
Embrace them all
Shed light on my pain
Heal a wound
Fall to your knees
Bring about my doom
Pick my heart up gently
It is made of glass
Sit down slowly
don’t shatter my past
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
- Moushka
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Re: untitled
Nice.......If there was a title I would say "Trust Unfolded" or something....lots of trust in this.......
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
- psychotic pretender
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Re: untitled
thanks much
glad you enjoyed
glad you enjoyed
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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- psychotic pretender
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Re: untitled
glad you enjoyed
thanks for the read
i still havent found the perfect title for this just yet but i promise to post it when it comes to me
thanks again
thanks for the read
i still havent found the perfect title for this just yet but i promise to post it when it comes to me
thanks again
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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Re: untitled
I like this one too... how about something like,, -My Past Gently Falls- very nice psychotic pretender
how ever slow
speeds up
as we grow
*
So much be said
with so few words
http://thelostnight.blogspot.com/
- psychotic pretender
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Re: untitled
thanks much
glad you enjoyed
and i will take that title into consideration
thanks again
glad you enjoyed
and i will take that title into consideration
thanks again
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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Re: untitled
I love the metaphor of the heart as shattered glass.
Purchase my first poetry collection on Amazon
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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
stronger than your voice." -- Jukoto
"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu
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Re: untitled
thanks much
glad you enjoyed
glad you enjoyed
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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- psychotic pretender
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- Joined: Sat Dec 15, 2007 11:59 am
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Re: untitled
thanks much
glad you enjoyed
glad you enjoyed
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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Re: untitled
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: untitled
It seems to be a love between two very different personalities
Stuck on Number 2. Learning to begin.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action
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Re: untitled
how strange it is to find that selecting a title can take much longer than composing the poem. and yet it is imperative to find the correct title.
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