No Angels Have Halos
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
- nrip4life
- prophet poet
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No Angels Have Halos
i thought i knew this one
or that one
because they were so
enthusiastic to tell of their self
i soon realized was never them
i looked into the past
only to find lies
i let trust blind me
all in vain all unreal in the end
wings of curiousity let me soar
only to find clouds of thunder
i took a few chances
and found nothing
but chances they secretly took
this one wanted excitment
this one wanted stimulation
this one wanted money
this one had low self- esteem
this one was abused
this one had it all
i looked her in the eyes
she lied to me again
in hopes she could find
what she lost
somewhere along the way...
or that one
because they were so
enthusiastic to tell of their self
i soon realized was never them
i looked into the past
only to find lies
i let trust blind me
all in vain all unreal in the end
wings of curiousity let me soar
only to find clouds of thunder
i took a few chances
and found nothing
but chances they secretly took
this one wanted excitment
this one wanted stimulation
this one wanted money
this one had low self- esteem
this one was abused
this one had it all
i looked her in the eyes
she lied to me again
in hopes she could find
what she lost
somewhere along the way...
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous
- northstar
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
i feel regret
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you
- JGarrison
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
great piece nrip... very... um almost a little to i suppose i should say... relatable... really enjoyed it
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”
-Jack Kerouac-
-Jack Kerouac-
- nrip4life
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
northstar- no regret only truth
jgarrison- glad u liked it.. its a male perspective for the female mind,..lol...thanks for readin..
jgarrison- glad u liked it.. its a male perspective for the female mind,..lol...thanks for readin..
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous
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- Demonic Grinning Poet
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
i realy liked this, honestly, tfrom being one myself, this tells what we girls do, most of us always lie to ge our way, and if we dont get it, then we lie more.... sad, but oh so very true
- JGarrison
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
and then you wonder why men are frustrated so oftenthis tells what we girls do, most of us always lie to ge our way, and if we dont get it, then we lie more
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”
-Jack Kerouac-
-Jack Kerouac-
- Mellen12
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
I love that line. The symbolism in what you say is so true.wings of curiousity let me soar
only to find clouds of thunder
Good work
"A woman with the courage to step out into the unknown, risking temporary loneliness for a shot at lasting joy, is more than a "single." She's singular. Instead of defining herself by what she lacks - a relationship with a man - she defines herself by what she has: a relationship with God." ~from Dawn Eden's 'The Thrill of the Chaste'
- northstar
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
i will not agree nrp4life
anyone can do that..men or women ,,they have all the same possibility to a wrong way
anyone can do that..men or women ,,they have all the same possibility to a wrong way
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you
- OriOnpheOnix
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- nrip4life
- prophet poet
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
black star shine- your honesty honestly amazes me
jgarrison- right one the bottom i bet you wouldnt be that open minded in person
mellen- nice to hear from ya i dont beleive believe weve met hi thanks for reading..
northstar- this one is exclusively from a male standpoint...in this regard i believe it is exclusively unique perspective meaning if a woman wrote it the entire perspective would be opposite ...thanks its always good to hear from you...
phoenix- thanks bro good to hear from you..
all in all this is my point men and woman are equal but equal in very different ways while one gives birth one stands in a world of intellectual confusion which can be just as painful in my personal case...lol anyways thanks for reading guys and gals..
jgarrison- right one the bottom i bet you wouldnt be that open minded in person
mellen- nice to hear from ya i dont beleive believe weve met hi thanks for reading..
northstar- this one is exclusively from a male standpoint...in this regard i believe it is exclusively unique perspective meaning if a woman wrote it the entire perspective would be opposite ...thanks its always good to hear from you...
phoenix- thanks bro good to hear from you..
all in all this is my point men and woman are equal but equal in very different ways while one gives birth one stands in a world of intellectual confusion which can be just as painful in my personal case...lol anyways thanks for reading guys and gals..
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous
- OriOnpheOnix
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Re: No Angels Have Halos
haha. not at , rather, with.
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