Could someone explain this bit to me...Debbie wrote:you could have been selfish and never shared this but you did and it took courage as well.
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It took courage and selflessness to publicly post such a stirring rendition of inner conflicts and feelings. But that's what most poetry is...
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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I'll bump this up again...Jim has picked it for an award and it is well worth the read..maybe them many more shall read this......
Wish you were in the Pages Orphen..and praying all is well..
Wish you were in the Pages Orphen..and praying all is well..
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If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.
Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06
this poem is amazing...its like everything i have thought and done but can't express right there written in front of me...i cried...
i have never gotten help, never wanted help..didn't think it worked...sometimes it is easier to think you are all alone or nobody cares.....for me it has been i guess
i have only been on here a week and don't really know anyone but thank you very much...
i have never gotten help, never wanted help..didn't think it worked...sometimes it is easier to think you are all alone or nobody cares.....for me it has been i guess
i have only been on here a week and don't really know anyone but thank you very much...
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This is VERY powerful and direct. It's simply written for the most part, but the simplicity of the poem only adds to it, not take away.
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wow. I love the bottom half of the poem the most. Its beautifully written... raw... I love it.
I'm very happy to hear that you got help and were helped. Thank you for sharing. I know that must have been very hard for you.
I'm very happy to hear that you got help and were helped. Thank you for sharing. I know that must have been very hard for you.
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Man I've missed a lot of good poetry since I've been gone...
Very well done, and kudos to you for sharing this... I can imagine that it was very hard, but you should be proud... You got help... you've survived... but you don't need me to tell you that...
Thank you very much for sharing, and I'm happy for you that you got help and are ok...
Very well done, and kudos to you for sharing this... I can imagine that it was very hard, but you should be proud... You got help... you've survived... but you don't need me to tell you that...
Thank you very much for sharing, and I'm happy for you that you got help and are ok...
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Unsettling. Disturbing but in some odd way courage seeps through the poem+++...if it were that you can but despair a little less______________________________BeeJay
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