moonflowers highlights October 07

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moonflowers highlights October 07

Post by moonflower » Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:26 pm

hi everyone!, Fall is really winding down and winter is just around the corner :hello: well here in the funny farm there were 8 new postings for the month of October..thanks to all who took the time to drop in and visit! is the poem to be highlighted .. :grin: :grin:


i sit.....written by berlie

I sit
and stare at
the computer
the cursor just blinks
and I swear the mouse winked
yet no words come forth
to grace these keys
and so I
still sit


well hey thanks again everyone for stopping by :grin: ..come on back again now that its November!
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inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: moonflowers October highlights

Post by Sailheat » Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:57 pm

I like the way this goes.

L1: 1 syllable
L2: 2 syllables
L3: 3 syllables
L4: 4 syllables
L5: 5 syllables
L6: 6 syllables
L7: 5 syllables
L8: 4syllables ....etc.

Good metrical extension...good poetry. :thumbsup:

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