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Asyndeton form
Asyndeton form
List of words, phrases, or expressions without conjunctions Such as “And” in, I, and, or, to link them.
Rhyme [ababcdcdeffegg ] 14 lines
PRAYER
Remembering again that mystery, which binds me still
though reversed plummeting of our spirits now.
Entranced always by life’s vista, powerless will,
as moonlight once more returns, to you only bow.
Those happy days, amid the splendour of youth
Unconscious visions, then sorrowfully cast aside.
Regaining scruples once turned from your truth
Life’s journey tempted, each burden forever hide.
Leaves crisper now, while grass replenished sweet
Hearts serene palpitating beneath each moonlight's air.
Appealing once more for mercy always given there
for who is greater than thee, through time shall meet
Profoundest thoughts, though my melancholy never would
Dissever this poor soul, to Heavens door finely understood
Richard Taylor
04-01-05
List of words, phrases, or expressions without conjunctions Such as “And” in, I, and, or, to link them.
Rhyme [ababcdcdeffegg ] 14 lines
PRAYER
Remembering again that mystery, which binds me still
though reversed plummeting of our spirits now.
Entranced always by life’s vista, powerless will,
as moonlight once more returns, to you only bow.
Those happy days, amid the splendour of youth
Unconscious visions, then sorrowfully cast aside.
Regaining scruples once turned from your truth
Life’s journey tempted, each burden forever hide.
Leaves crisper now, while grass replenished sweet
Hearts serene palpitating beneath each moonlight's air.
Appealing once more for mercy always given there
for who is greater than thee, through time shall meet
Profoundest thoughts, though my melancholy never would
Dissever this poor soul, to Heavens door finely understood
Richard Taylor
04-01-05
- heinzs
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We had this form as a challenge some time back... will have to peruse the archives to find the entries. I seem to recall they were all very good.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
- Posts: 8419
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Actually the earliest poem I have for you now since you've returned is dated February 2006.
Sorry...
Sorry...
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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This is a sad lesson. It's still possible that it is available somewhere... Google has archives that go back quite a way. Do you remember any of the lines? It might show up on a google search using a line from the poem.
I almost religiously make hard copies of anything I write as well as periodic CD backups of all data files. Even then I lose things because of the ephemeral nature of cyberspace itself.
H.
I almost religiously make hard copies of anything I write as well as periodic CD backups of all data files. Even then I lose things because of the ephemeral nature of cyberspace itself.
H.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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My Poet's Page Archive | Topics I've started
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
- Posts: 8419
- Joined: Tue Dec 18, 2001 12:01 am
- Tag line: Do no harm
- Location: Novato, CA
- Contact:
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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