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BRONX MAFIA- MINI PROLOGUE

Post by LadySaturn » Fri Oct 11, 2002 2:47 am

Okay this is a rough draft to the mini prologue to my novel "Bronx Mafia" which I should be done typing up soon and send to the publisher. I still have some ways to go though.


PROLOGUE


My name is Kid, I was born and in my Mortal life lived in the
Bronx. Only to have my world turned upside-down. It happened in 1927,
I was only twenty, and related to the Mafia. My father was Godfather of the
family business, the Bronx Mafia. He was highly respected and, in disguise
a Soldier of God. No one knew, not even me, it was only years later after
his death that I found out. It was a late June night, when my parents were hunted
down and killed by the Devil and his soldiers, and at the same time my sister
Nails had been kidnapped. It devastated me, but most importantly it almost
destroyed me. That’s when Saint Catherine was sent to me, to guide me in
the right direction and, to my purpose in life. I was to become Vampire-Goddess
and, with it Immortality and wings of an angel. My job was and, still is to guard
the Holy Grail, find the Vampire-King, protect both the Immortal and Mortal
worlds (including Heaven and Earth) from the Devil and the Kingdom of Hell and,
at the same time fight for peace during Armageddon, or as I like to call it the final
throw down where anything goes. My friends Sarah, Kate, Melissa, and
Sunshine along with my two cousins Dena and Krista, were made Immortal to
help me, you’ll read more about them later on. Anyway, right now I want to get
to the story. I’ve caught you up to date, as of now the year is 2,008 and, all
of the world is in turmoil, Armageddon is well under way and, I’m caught in
the middle of it all......

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Post by Moongem » Fri Oct 11, 2002 8:49 pm

Interesting, Melissa! I would like to see Chapter 1. [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]

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Post by Tom Watson » Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:28 pm

Well, my Lady, what is the status of this book? Need more on this...more you hear?!....hehehheh..

By the way, This was an interesting comment:
Interesting, Melissa! I would like to see Chapter 1.
So when do you reveal chapter 1, Melissa??

heheheheh....

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Post by LadySaturn » Sun Jul 24, 2005 8:50 pm

Chapter one is done it has been for awhile.. half of the book is finished. Amongst working on this, I've been asked to work on another project one I have to keep hush hush about or I no longer get the opportunity of working on it..

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Post by bags123 » Mon Jul 25, 2005 8:53 am

Melissa, Melissa, Melissa,.... this is not very "La Cosa Nostra" of you, anyway,... you're late. Constantine's already been written and made into a movie. :mrgreen:
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Post by LadySaturn » Mon Jul 25, 2005 11:24 am

Who do you think they got the idea from, Bags? I mean really.. And anyway, this isn't nothin like constantine crap.. And I told you not to call me by my real name.. dammit..:smack: Damn westies..

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Post by bags123 » Mon Jul 25, 2005 11:47 am

this isn't nothin like constantine crap
I hate it when you're Constantipated. :mrgreen:
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Post by LadySaturn » Mon Jul 25, 2005 9:53 pm

Well I wouldn't have this problem, if you kept your hands off my burritos.. :roll:

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Post by preston » Fri Jul 29, 2005 7:28 am

Melissa
I just met a girl named Melissa
And suddenly I found
How wonderful a sound can be

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Post by LadySaturn » Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:15 am

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