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Post by LadySaturn » Wed Dec 10, 2003 10:04 pm

Don't worry a sequel is coming.... I'm just waiting to hear from Thief.. and I know I'll hear it from Preston.. :roll:

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Post by Tom Watson » Wed Dec 10, 2003 11:29 pm

Ah my Lady Saturn, you have truly lived up to expectations!
We truly enjoyed this story, though some of us felt just a little neglected.
That's okay, though, because I explained to them that I was the only real one of us. I really look forward to the sequel, hoping that you might involve one of your planets. Kind of make it an interplanetary mystery? It would be great if you included the Dark Planet. You remember that planet don't you? You remembered it well enough to ship me off to it a while ago.

This was a really enjoyable read. :2cents: :2cents:
Have a JD on me! (and me)(and me too)(don't forget me!)
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Post by LadySaturn » Wed Dec 10, 2003 11:51 pm

I remember.. I was just waiting for you to take off that damn helmet.. heh heh heh.. Oh yeah, I have special plans for you and your other halves in the sequel. heh heh heh.. :twisted:

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Post by thief of dreams » Thu Dec 11, 2003 12:29 am

ohhhh this is awesome Saturn.. sorry i didnt read and reply sooner, im at my Ma's and well its complicated.. but i havent been able to get online until tonight... this is friggin kick ass... i love it....
never thought id be the bad guy though, i kept coming up with names of people not yet mentioned.. lol.. and then.. boom!!! she dropped the bomb on me... babahh... she dropped the bomb on me... lol.. ok ill quit singing... lmao.. this rocks.. i love the reason behind it all and just hot damn girl... this rocks!!!
thank you...

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Post by LadySaturn » Thu Dec 11, 2003 12:35 am

:shock: Your welcome Thief... Now I'm just waiting for Bags and Preston to reply.. I can only imagine what Preston would say.. heh heh heh...

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Post by bags123 » Fri Dec 12, 2003 7:42 am

Bravo, Lady Saturn..........great job!!! Looking forward to part 2.
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Post by LadySaturn » Fri Dec 12, 2003 5:11 pm

Thanks Bags... By the way, shouldn't you be over at the pub, serving up the drinks.. I don't pay you.. wait.. nevermind.. heh heh heh

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Post by preston » Fri Dec 12, 2003 9:51 pm

well, i just printed off 13 pages for my bedtime reading material

there's not anything in here that's gonna give me bad dreams ...
is there ?

:book:

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Post by Gillian » Sat Dec 13, 2003 6:54 am

Here's my bad dream report from another thread:

Dear Lady Saturn,

I really enjoyed your story. It was a most excellent adventure. I think I've suffered from post-traumatic-stress-disorder since I was kidnapped, I've been in the psych ward ever since. Bags has been a great help though. He smuggles in green beer disguised in plain brown wrapping! I have a problem with nightmares too. Preston is saying "I Do" dressed in a lime-green tulle concotion. He's trying to stand erect(!) at the altar, but it's obvious he's never had satin pumps on his tender tootsies 'cos he's wobbling all over the place. Oh, and when the Minister said "If anyone here has any reason why this union should not take place etc. etc.", the whole congregation put their hands up and were promptly told to "Sit down, you're rocking the boat."
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Post by preston » Sat Dec 13, 2003 6:59 am

:snore:

:shock:

:book:

:snore:

:shock:

:book:

:snore:

:shock:

:book:

:computer:

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Post by LadySaturn » Sat Dec 13, 2003 11:24 am

Bad dreams hmmm let me see.. heh heh heh... Gilly, don't worry in the sequel you fully recover and kick ass.. heh heh heh.. sorry about the kidnapping thing by the way, but someone had to be the victims.. oh yeah sorry about the nightmares too... heh heh heh And don't worry Preston, I'll try to make sure your not married to Bubba in the sequel.. heh heh heh.. heh heh heh...

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Post by Floetry Spades » Sat Dec 13, 2003 2:02 pm

:lol: That was fun to read. I can't wait for the sequal. *jumps up and down*
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Post by LadySaturn » Sat Dec 13, 2003 2:09 pm

I'm working on it... *Heads to the tool shed.. with laptop in hand and cigar in mouth. Has Bubba guard the door of the tool shed*

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Post by preston » Sat Dec 13, 2003 9:53 pm

:snore:

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Post by LadySaturn » Sat Dec 13, 2003 9:59 pm

I take it Presty-Westy, we either had nightmares or were surprised by the story.. Or it just might be a little of both... heh heh heh...

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