ponderings of an incarcerated twenty-one year old

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Wmartin
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ponderings of an incarcerated twenty-one year old

Post by Wmartin » Sun Nov 09, 2014 12:47 pm

as I lay in prison I remembered my father telling me that his family had been in Georgia[this country] since it was a penal colony and I wondered if:
perhaps the grave beginnings
of this life that,s just begun
are the echoes of an existence
that has died but is not done
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heinzs
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Re: ponderings of an incarcerated twenty-one year old

Post by heinzs » Mon Nov 10, 2014 11:55 am

Thank you for posting, William. I tried to re-format this for you taking a "guess" at what you had in mind. Let me know if I was successful.

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Re: ponderings of an incarcerated twenty-one year old

Post by heinzs » Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:30 pm

I like it!
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