Where have you gone

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CamelToe
Clearwater Poet
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Where have you gone

Post by CamelToe » Sat Dec 08, 2012 1:06 pm

Oh my voice my window to my soul

Why have you left me empty minded and alone

Words I can not find as desperate as I try, tears begin to roll up in my eyes

This feeling I must express, I need to get it out

So frustrating I begin to shout



I write and I jot down meaningless phrases

This pen of mine is running me through mazes

So many words I have wrote, this quill has become empty and broke



Must I cut a vien, will the pain give me inspiration, dip this pen in the blood that drains

Will those blood stained words invoke my creation





Prompt: Betrayed by your pen
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before

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heinzs
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Re: Where have you gone

Post by heinzs » Mon Dec 10, 2012 9:34 pm

Prompt poems are sometimes difficult to master. This one is a very good effort. Keep posting. It'll grow on you.

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