750ml of Reclinig Chair

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wgilstrap
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750ml of Reclinig Chair

Post by wgilstrap » Wed Nov 14, 2012 7:21 pm

Callous heart, devour
Dank remedies, grievously I drank
'Till an illumination invaded, scouring
My transom - I tediously cloaked

Oh, how I loathed the pretension
Dour, old heavenly host - pervading
A storehouse, that was my own
Eradicating cheers to treasures gone

Cheers, now to you - I diverge
Dour, old heavenly host
Darkness, you have cloaked
Flowers, you have summoned forth

Birds, you churned from sleep
Perched upon their limbs where they dwell
Lodged in their solemn peace
Song in mouth, eloquently placed

In your brilliance, shall nature inherently gloat
'Till your nemesis once again, corrupts
Your phosphorescence glare
Infamous shroud - plundering day, for plunder's sake

Therewith shall callous heart, devour
Dank remedies, grievously and with ponderous heart
Tilling that storehouse of treasures gone
'Till lubricious chatter from songbird is heard.
Last edited by wgilstrap on Thu Dec 13, 2012 8:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: 750ml of Reclinig Chair

Post by heinzs » Mon Dec 10, 2012 9:35 pm

I think your wonderful vocabulary scared the hoi poloi away... lol. Delicious!

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Re: 750ml of Reclinig Chair

Post by bags123 » Tue Dec 11, 2012 9:27 am

Vibrantly expressed. :hello: ( Wow,...you used almost the whole dictionary on that one. :mrgreen: )
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wgilstrap
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Re: 750ml of Reclinig Chair

Post by wgilstrap » Wed Dec 12, 2012 12:57 pm

Thanks Heinzs and Bags. I appreciate your time and comments.

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Re: 750ml of Reclinig Chair

Post by MJPease » Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:38 am

Hello wgilstrap, I thought I'd check out what your "750ml of Reclining Chair" had to offer. So glad I did an Excellent! read. Take Care
Take me back, so far back, adjust this fate. Afeared lately of pen, in abscence of light. The fear I might stumble upon a plagiarized soul. Wipe this dark slate clean, regain my thought. Add the words that rekindle my depth of soul.

From: Summers Discontent 7-24-02

Sincerely

Michael J Pease

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Re: 750ml of Reclinig Chair

Post by wgilstrap » Wed Jan 02, 2013 5:06 pm

:hello: Thank You Micheal, I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for your time.
Hope you have a Happy New Year.
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