"soul-itude"

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goldenrod
Babbling Brook Poet
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"soul-itude"

Post by goldenrod » Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:36 pm

I am a star, lost in the firmament.
One star, sad, lonely and blue.
Wandering outside of its galaxy,
I yearn, once more, to be with you.

Deep in space, absolute zero's place.
Now a cold, ice-age cocoon for me.
Love, sadness of what used to be.
Always in, review...

Sightless eyes, seeing no paradise.
Never a chance of winning!
I journey on, under my own pulsive curse.
No new beginning, what was the sinning?

One soul, that no longer seeks its mate.
One heart, that has, forever, sealed its fate.
Once, two hearts, they beat as one.
Now one throbs, close to a heart that's new.

And I now know, I have lost you!
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heinzs
The Fat Cat
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Re: "soul-itude"

Post by heinzs » Sat Aug 18, 2012 12:47 pm

Nice use of rhythm and rhyme.
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