Bitter Adversaries
Mind knows logically
Heart feels emotionally
The two battle constantly!
Mind must be right
Yet Heart won't give up its fight
Heart skips a beat...
Mind extolls all it's extensive knowledge
Heart can't compete
It hasn't a chance to even speak
But ohh the pain Heart feels...
Heart barely beats
it feels so weak...
Mind says "I told you so"
Heart Arrests...
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Mind feels the slow cold creeping of death
Mind learns to regret
Heart was right afterall!
If caught between Mind's advice and Heart's will...
Follow The Heart!
Bitter Adversaries
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- Clearwater Poet
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Bitter Adversaries
Mind knows logically, Heart feels emotionally... Why must the two be bitter adversaries?
As the moon blots out the sun, so does human wisdom the divine in our hearts!
As the moon blots out the sun, so does human wisdom the divine in our hearts!
- Travis
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Re: Bitter Adversaries
A very unique and interesting write!
-Travis
-Travis
The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius
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- Babbling Brook Poet
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Re: Bitter Adversaries
I think I have a couple of poems along the same path, but expressed in a different manner...well deserved kudos for your approach!
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