Bitter Adversaries

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WanderWren
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Bitter Adversaries

Post by WanderWren » Fri Aug 10, 2012 5:21 pm

Bitter Adversaries


Mind knows logically

Heart feels emotionally

The two battle constantly!

Mind must be right

Yet Heart won't give up its fight

Heart skips a beat...

Mind extolls all it's extensive knowledge

Heart can't compete

It hasn't a chance to even speak

But ohh the pain Heart feels...

Heart barely beats

it feels so weak...

Mind says "I told you so"

Heart Arrests...

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Mind feels the slow cold creeping of death

Mind learns to regret

Heart was right afterall!

If caught between Mind's advice and Heart's will...

Follow The Heart!
Mind knows logically, Heart feels emotionally... Why must the two be bitter adversaries?

As the moon blots out the sun, so does human wisdom the divine in our hearts!

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Travis
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Re: Bitter Adversaries

Post by Travis » Sun Aug 12, 2012 8:34 pm

A very unique and interesting write!

-Travis :thumbsup:
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goldenrod
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Re: Bitter Adversaries

Post by goldenrod » Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:59 pm

I think I have a couple of poems along the same path, but expressed in a different manner...well deserved kudos for your approach! :bow: :bow: :bow:
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