High Tide
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A place for new members to post their poetry so we may get to know them and their poetry better. NO erotica.
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A place for new members to post their poetry so we may get to know them and their poetry better. NO erotica.
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- Travis
- The Transformed One
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High Tide
The goodbyes
the farewells
the empty shells
the sea
the sand
the hand
receding
leaving land
going
going
gone
a wave of emotion
the ocean
holding on
holding fast
getting past
the sorrow and tears
overcoming fears
having hope
learning to cope
as high tide
rumbles
rolling in
feeling the rush
hands waving
reaching
meeting
once again...
© ~Travis
the farewells
the empty shells
the sea
the sand
the hand
receding
leaving land
going
going
gone
a wave of emotion
the ocean
holding on
holding fast
getting past
the sorrow and tears
overcoming fears
having hope
learning to cope
as high tide
rumbles
rolling in
feeling the rush
hands waving
reaching
meeting
once again...
© ~Travis
The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius
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- LJAmara
- Clearwater Poet
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Re: High Tide
Emotion, like tides of an ocean. Ebb and flow, wax and wane.
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- Babbling Brook Poet
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Re: High Tide
Your poem reminds me of one of my favourite musical pieces, by Romantic composer Felix Mendelssohn, the Hebrides Overture Opus 26, (commonly known as Fingal's Cave overture). Emotions expressed as echoing sounds of the sea!
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- Travis
- The Transformed One
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Re: High Tide
Thanks to you both...glad you liked!
-Travis
-Travis
The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius
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- Eric
- A Poet in the Rain
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Re: High Tide
interesting piece my friend ... descriptive image!
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- Travis
- The Transformed One
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- Joined: Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:31 pm
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Re: High Tide
The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius
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Re: High Tide
Fascinating!
Just the type of thing I enjoy when feeling a bit depressed! Thanks for sharing!
Just the type of thing I enjoy when feeling a bit depressed! Thanks for sharing!
- Travis
- The Transformed One
- Posts: 463
- Joined: Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:31 pm
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Re: High Tide
Thanks!
The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius
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