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Travis
The Transformed One
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Discovery

Post by Travis » Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:13 am

Waiting
Wondering
Never giving up hope
That one day
Discovering simple things in life
Will come to you
Slowing down
Stopping
Standing
Looking
Reaching
Will lead you
Growing
Searching
Seeking
Understanding
Uncovering
And finding
You…

©~ Travis
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The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts. ~Marcus Aurelius

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DarleneG
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Re: Discovery

Post by DarleneG » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:16 pm

:hello: travis, I, too, like the simple things in life. And I'm surprised you have not gotten any replies to your poem. I enjoy what you have written, so I hope you will keep writing. :thumbsup:
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Travis
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Re: Discovery

Post by Travis » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:24 pm

Thanks, Darlene! I'm honored to know there is someone who enjoys what I write! I'm a big fan of yours as well! :wink: :hello:

-Travis
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DarleneG
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Re: Discovery

Post by DarleneG » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:30 pm

:hello: I'm sure more people that me enjoy your poetry! But thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you like my work as well. And I'm looking forward to reading more of yours, so keep on writing. You're :cool:
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Travis
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Re: Discovery

Post by Travis » Mon Jul 02, 2012 8:10 pm

:wink: Thanks...
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Cariad
Clearwater Poet
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Re: Discovery

Post by Cariad » Wed Jul 04, 2012 1:44 pm

I always enjoy your poems Travis, :grin: not forgetting Darlenes poems....each one a cup brimful of cheer :grin: :grin:

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Travis
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Re: Discovery

Post by Travis » Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:25 pm

Thanks, Cariad! In the short time I've been here, I have learned a great deal from other writers here...However, I feel I have a long journey ahead of me before my style is well accepted...but I will continue and carry on...I will write what I feel and hopefully, someone out there will be inspired and/or touched...we are all here to encourage and build one another up...my journey continues...

~Travis :wink:
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Eric
A Poet in the Rain
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Re: Discovery

Post by Eric » Thu Jul 05, 2012 11:37 am

As for your journey Travis!, I have seen you already reshape your path ... good job at combing your style .... I truly enjoy reading your work! :bump:
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Travis
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Re: Discovery

Post by Travis » Fri Jul 06, 2012 9:37 pm

Thank you, my friend...appreciate the encouragement! :thumbsup:

-Travis
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Lonnie
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Re: Discovery

Post by Lonnie » Thu Jul 19, 2012 4:41 am

An intriguing theme here, that captures the readers imagination as well as the eye! Enjoyed this!

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Travis
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Re: Discovery

Post by Travis » Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:17 pm

Thanks, Lonnie...appreciate the comments... :thumbsup:

~Travis
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