Still Standing

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Eric
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Still Standing

Post by Eric » Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:06 am

I dont want to feel that pain
The one I have carried since my youth
I have been drenched from all this rain
Just seeking for its truth

I know it has been dark some days
I desperately tried to hold on tight
I survived this life, so many ways
Even created some needed light

Could you really bare to hear?
How down in this life I was
I dont want you to shed a tear
Because I know I've been the cause

I find myself looking inside
Trying to figure why I paid such toll
Its was hard to grasp my pride
In a life out of control

Was I running through the trees
With no directions in my mind
How did I miss that steady breeze
That would have helped me find

I have not had much help in life
It was so few but even fewer cared
I have removed that sharpened knife
For some reason I've been spared

I am taking all I had to learn
Expecially the down times and the bad
Because of what I got from life
For those hard times I am glad

I'm stronger now, than I have ever been
I know soon, you'll see me standing tall?
I faced these battles and I had to win
Because I stood when I did fall!

© 2012 Eric R. Garcia. All rights reserved www.blizzardsofthought.com
***Poetry Pages Poet of the Month June 2012***
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goldenrod
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Re: Still Standing

Post by goldenrod » Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:40 pm

Our weaknesses can point to the pathways of our redemption and, sometimes. without our overt participation. Found your piece an interesting read.
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Travis
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Re: Still Standing

Post by Travis » Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:57 pm

:bump: :
I thought was reading about me; WOW! I can relate! A very heartfelt write!

-Travis :bow:
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