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FirestoneFeinberg
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Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:22 am

It’s late
at night
and I’m
in bed —
trying
to write
a
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Post by heinzs » Mon Nov 28, 2011 5:43 pm

:lol:
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Re: a

Post by Aeon Flux » Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:38 pm

I was intrigued by the truncated "a"... this is exactly what happens to me when I try to write late at night and fall asleep holding the pen... lol. Cheers Mr. Firestone!

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Re: a

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Mon Dec 26, 2011 1:48 pm

Aeon Flux wrote:I was intrigued by the truncated "a"... this is exactly what happens to me when I try to write late at night and fall asleep holding the pen... lol. Cheers Mr. Firestone!

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Sorry for my late reply; of a sudden I had a heart attack and was in hospital for five days or so -- it was not fun and I don't recommend it! Thanks for your wonderful comment: altho' I posted this poem on other websites, etc, no one really 'got' it as you did. Thank God that SOMEONE understood me -- ar least I was somewhere within the outer borders of reality! Sincerely, David
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Post by heinzs » Mon Dec 26, 2011 5:02 pm

Having a heart attack is no picnic... I'm glad you seem to be recuperating. Best wishes to you!

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Re: a

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:37 am

heinzs wrote:Having a heart attack is no picnic... I'm glad you seem to be recuperating. Best wishes to you!

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Thank you sir for your care -- nope 'tain't no picnic -- but am recovering well -- and the science of coronary medicine -- these days -- is miraculous. I very much appreciate your kind wishes!
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Post by Aeon Flux » Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:45 pm

Wow... I hope you are continuing to mend. My best wishes to you as well.

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Re: a

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:01 am

Thank you sir, I am doing well. Even writing poetry! Hope you're well too. A great 2012 to you and yours! --David :hello: :hello:
Aeon Flux wrote:Wow... I hope you are continuing to mend. My best wishes to you as well.

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