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hope1994
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vulture

Post by hope1994 » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:20 pm

I roam the sky in search of food
Here me caw
I look over my kingdom
You are my servant's for life
I am the vulture you are the prey
I see you run in terror it pleases me to see
The terror in your eyes you will never be as high rank
As the vulture you try to face me but you always fail
You are not as powerful as the vulture
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Re: voultre

Post by heinzs » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:48 pm

I think you wanted "vulture" for title and instead of "voucher"... I may be wrong though.
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Re: voultre

Post by John DeBona » Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:52 pm

my flight was late, can I get a food voucher
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Re: voultre

Post by heinzs » Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:00 pm

lol of course you may... any dietary restrictions?
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Re: vuture

Post by hope1994 » Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:59 pm

yayaya laugh all you want :evil:

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Re: vuture

Post by John DeBona » Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:27 pm

One last time honey,,,,vulture
But when that which is perfect is come, then that which is in part shall be no more.
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Re: vuture

Post by John DeBona » Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:29 pm

Forgot,,look at title should be vulture
then in the body,,,should be prey, unless you want them to pray
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Re: vuture

Post by hope1994 » Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:51 pm

haha i hope your happy :devil: :twisted: :twisted: :evil:

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Re: vuture

Post by Pellethie » Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:04 pm

Wouldn't be the first time somebody eft an l out unintentionally. Although this poem's passion was felt by me, I would suggest that Hope research wildlife a bit more before writing of an animal's call or caw. I'm not all that familiar with old world species of Vultures,(Buzzards as we call them) but of the species known by me hiss sometimes but never do they caw.


They will however scent the dying, wait, perched on a limb or hovering above upon a thermal with the patience their kind have applied for millions of years, before setting about picking one's bones clean at one's last few breaths.

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Re: vuture

Post by hope1994 » Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:14 pm

thanks but no thanks
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Re: vuture

Post by heinzs » Thu Jul 07, 2011 3:58 pm

The documentaries from the Serengheti plains in Africa often show the vultures, but I don't remember now what kind of sound they made. I do know that they often do not wait for their intended prey to die before beginning to feast upon the eyeballs and flesh...

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