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Eric
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Dreams Discovered

Post by Eric » Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:45 am

I woke myself from crying ... my dreams tore me apart
I wish someone could figure out .. help these dreams depart
What it is that I was seeing .... had me shaking to the bone
It had reminded me of some times ... some bad times I have known
I could not stop the running ... I'm not as fast as in my youth
Not sure of what I was running from ... still searching for its truth
My heart was pounding so dam hard ... I could not bare to speak
I felt the weight was pushing down ... my legs had grown so weak
Why do we always revert ... to old habits and mistake?
Why does it always shine its face .. while I am not awake?
I tend to fear what s in my mind ... when I close my eyes
When they are open I can fight ... and fend off my old lies
But when I sleep my dreams discover... things I have tried to hide
I seem to erase it from my dreams .. how I am the man who tried
Am I to weak to ovecome ... these thoughts that haunt my mind?
Are these troubles in my dreams, and in my wake affined?

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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by heinzs » Wed Jun 15, 2011 4:31 pm

:bump:
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by Eric » Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:00 pm

So does that mean you liked it lol
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by heinzs » Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:50 pm

lol it means I read it and thought it deserved more attention than it was getting and I didn't have a lot of time to leave a comment. :thumbsup:
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by Eric » Thu Oct 27, 2011 10:00 am

so how do we get it to have more attention ! :shrug:
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by moonflower » Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:11 am

i like!..just hang in there..the attention seems to come in spurts ... :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by Eric » Mon Nov 21, 2011 12:50 pm

lol I have alot posted on here but they didnt really get to much attention! :P although my book has now sold over 3100 copies I think it has done very well.
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by psychotic pretender » Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:05 am

poem did need more attention, well placed bump heinzs

and moonflower is right, attention comes in spurts round here

i wouldnt worry about it, people read alot but its gotten to whre its like pulling teeth to get people to comment

anyways

good write, good read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by heinzs » Thu Nov 24, 2011 10:33 am

:hello:

Thanks PP!

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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by psychotic pretender » Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:57 am

anytime

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/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by Yorkie » Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:37 am

My little input here is I think that poem is excellent, it made great reading, wish I could write that good. :thumbsup:

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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by FirestoneFeinberg » Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:48 pm

Great poem! Easy to read. Easy to understand. Universal subject. I dig. -- David
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by Eric » Fri Jan 27, 2012 1:54 pm

:thewave:
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Re: Dreams Discovered

Post by Travis » Fri Feb 10, 2012 11:33 am

I liked the emotion this piece provoked and the images it conveyed...nice work!

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