My Girl

[nightowlwritter]

My girl
She' a sad girl
Coming through my sea
Her eyes are wet with sorrow
Coming through my sea
She' a lonely girl
Walking upon my shore
Her head hangs low
Walking upon my shore
She' a fun girl
Sitting in the dark
Her smile brings the sun out
Sitting in the dark
She' a wonderful girl,
But she' always forgotten about.

[heinzs]

We are sometimes slow in responding. Hang in there.

:-)

[thief of dreams]

I absolutely love the Blues like feel to this poem! I can see it being sung with tears of regret and longing as well as hidden happiness in the singers eyes...

[nightowlwritter]

YAY i have to admit no one really seemed to get the blues influence of this poem! im happy someone noticed it.

[purplelionness]

For your girl to feel like she is the girl. Is enough, through all life throws, good or bad

[Eric]

Agree is a nice bluesy feel

[nightowlwritter]

thanks, i have found that listenign to music that has a real soul, like blues, helps me put a little more into my poems when writting them.

[Aram]

Me too, try The Doors, tons of inspiration.

[nightowlwritter]

i love the Doors, they do help me write a lot. anothe one is bb king

[Eric]

I have done some of my poetry to composed instrumentals and they truely came to life... blizzardsofthought.com some samples on the audio page