Read Between the lines

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vibesmaster
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Read Between the lines

Post by vibesmaster » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:51 pm

Read between the lines
the lines in my face the lines of pain,
worring and hardship.
The lines of wisdom and virtue
through tears,
The lines of sleepless nights
the scars of winter,
Face pale as the moon maiden eyes,
once diamond, now like pearls.
Read between the lines of the brush,
every stroke a work of beauty,
every stroke a peice of my soul produced
on canvas;
never can a stroke be wasted,
The painting of my entire being;
my soul.
Read between the lines,
the lines of poetry,
the lyrics of a song,
words never coincidental.
A deeper meaning in every phrase,
in every thought.
Read between the lines,
the lines of life,
A leaf forever being turned,
Mysteries ever unravelling,
A lesson always being taught
to be learnt.
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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright
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Re: Read Between the lines

Post by heinzs » Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:53 am

Life happens between the lines.

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Re: Read Between the lines

Post by heinzs » Wed Aug 15, 2012 1:48 pm

Or totally outside of the lines...

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Re: Read Between the lines

Post by Travis » Sat Sep 01, 2012 6:57 am

Nice images here! The message it conveys to the reader is a good one as well! Well done!! :bow:

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CatieRose
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Re: Read Between the lines

Post by CatieRose » Sat Oct 13, 2012 2:45 pm

between those lines I see a beautiful soul. loved your poem. hugs, catie :)

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Re: Read Between the lines

Post by bags123 » Sun Oct 14, 2012 7:01 am

I generally spend most of my time between the lines. :cheers:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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Re: Read Between the lines

Post by wgilstrap » Wed Nov 14, 2012 7:25 pm

Great concept.......very philosophical. :wink:
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