Discipline Affair

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charles.degollado
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Discipline Affair

Post by charles.degollado » Mon Sep 13, 2010 11:46 pm

Revised 8-25-11

It’s my turn away.
I’m crashing burned away.
Try throwing wrong worlds away.
I’m left or right without you
A thousand days ago.

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-- Previous Version--
Try alone
You and I
It's my turn
Crash and burn
Without you
Left or right
Last edited by charles.degollado on Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:32 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Discipline Affair

Post by heinzs » Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:31 pm

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thief of dreams
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Re: Discipline Affair

Post by thief of dreams » Sat Jan 29, 2011 1:42 am

So simple yet universally felt and understood! :thumbsup:
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
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Re: Discipline Affair

Post by bags123 » Sat Jan 29, 2011 8:16 am

I'm sorry,...but I'm not getting it. Is this about experimenting with "Open Marraige",....and it's negative effects? :?:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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charles.degollado
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Re: Discipline Affair

Post by charles.degollado » Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:37 pm

bags123 wrote:I'm sorry,...but I'm not getting it. Is this about experimenting with "Open Marraige",....and it's negative effects? :?:
No, it's about the break-up of a long-term couple.
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charles.degollado
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Re: Discipline Affair

Post by charles.degollado » Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:37 pm

Revised ^
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