15 Scorpions

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Joehanna
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15 Scorpions

Post by Joehanna » Fri Oct 30, 2009 12:00 pm

I am afraid.
15 scorpions
are crawling on my back
trying to get under my spine
I am polite
I offer them my right arm
but they don’t listen

I’m afraid to move
I don’t want to hurt them
even I know
I’m the one who will suffer
I’ve called for help
but they put me on hold
according to them
my problem is not urgent
But they don’t feel my fear
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heinzs
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:24 pm

:thumbsup:

Wonderful!
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Joehanna
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by Joehanna » Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:34 am

Thank you Heinzs:)
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Tony Fiona
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by Tony Fiona » Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:23 pm

brilliant :cheers:
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by audiofool » Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:09 am

:hearts: Love it!
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Joehanna
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by Joehanna » Thu Nov 19, 2009 6:57 am

Thank you very much:D
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by writerslitmuse » Thu Apr 15, 2010 10:54 am

Very nice poem! I am the poetry editor for "The Writer's Literary Muse". You are invited to submit this poem for publication in our upcoming June issue. Please email this piece to
email: thewritersliterarymuse@Gmail.com
Website: http://www.thewritersliterarymuse.com
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Joehanna
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Re: 15 Scorpions

Post by Joehanna » Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:34 pm

Thank you very much!
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