15 Scorpions
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15 Scorpions
I am afraid.
15 scorpions
are crawling on my back
trying to get under my spine
I am polite
I offer them my right arm
but they don’t listen
I’m afraid to move
I don’t want to hurt them
even I know
I’m the one who will suffer
I’ve called for help
but they put me on hold
according to them
my problem is not urgent
But they don’t feel my fear
15 scorpions
are crawling on my back
trying to get under my spine
I am polite
I offer them my right arm
but they don’t listen
I’m afraid to move
I don’t want to hurt them
even I know
I’m the one who will suffer
I’ve called for help
but they put me on hold
according to them
my problem is not urgent
But they don’t feel my fear
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
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Re: 15 Scorpions
Wonderful!
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: 15 Scorpions
Thank you Heinzs:)
- Tony Fiona
- Seafoam Poet
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Re: 15 Scorpions
brilliant
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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Re: 15 Scorpions
Love it!
Re: 15 Scorpions
Thank you very much:D
Re: 15 Scorpions
Very nice poem! I am the poetry editor for "The Writer's Literary Muse". You are invited to submit this poem for publication in our upcoming June issue. Please email this piece to
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Thank you very much!
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