The Truth

[Joehanna]

The Truth

The truth shivers in the darkness
demanding justice for the moon
Under our eyes it stands up tall
showing no fear when death comes to embrace him
showing no remorse after breaking all the sins
the truth stands up tall
But when the night comes
it shivers alone in the darkness
demanding justice for the moon
while knowing there’s no one out to hear him

[heinzs]

Isn't that the truth!

[Queen]

this poem is beautiful, i can really feel the lonelyness in the words. but the last line throws me off can you find another way to say "but no ones out to hear him" it's not as eloquent as the rest of the poem. but i really did like this one you could almost read it like a slow haunting song

[Joehanna]

Thank you Queen and Heinzs

[audiofool]

Beautiful poem.

[Joehanna]

Thanks :)