seagull days

[orphani]

there are days.........................................................i
am not agile in,
seagull days,
only they can master.
higher then light soaring ....the wind....................................as i

limpingfrozenburning:
with,salt,andshell,anddriftedwood,
stand discarded
in the tidal plastic(dreaming.............

i knew you once..................................................birds close to God
i knew and flew wing to wing among you brothers),
but how small in your view
is a
single
grain
o
f
s
a
n
d
.

[Queen]

creative.

[JGarrison]

the format you used in this is really interesting, i like parts of it and other parts seem a little cluttered, but there are some great lines here :)

limpingfrozenburning:
with,salt,andshell,anddriftedwood,
stand discarded
in the tidal plastic(dreaming.............

i really liked that stanza.