seagull days

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orphani

seagull days

Post by orphani » Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:32 pm

there are days.........................................................i
am not agile in,
seagull days,
only they can master.
higher then light soaring ....the wind....................................as i

limpingfrozenburning:
with,salt,andshell,anddriftedwood,
stand discarded
in the tidal plastic(dreaming.............

i knew you once..................................................birds close to God
i knew and flew wing to wing among you brothers),
but how small in your view
is a
single
grain
o
f
s
a
n
d
.

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Queen
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Re: seagull days

Post by Queen » Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:37 am

:cool: creative.
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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JGarrison
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Re: seagull days

Post by JGarrison » Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:20 am

the format you used in this is really interesting, i like parts of it and other parts seem a little cluttered, but there are some great lines here :)
limpingfrozenburning:
with,salt,andshell,anddriftedwood,
stand discarded
in the tidal plastic(dreaming.............
i really liked that stanza.
“What’s in store for me in the direction I don’t take?”

-Jack Kerouac-

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