your skin -that far away mystery

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orphani

your skin -that far away mystery

Post by orphani » Tue Sep 08, 2009 8:48 pm

your skin is.........a far away mystery.
the distance..................................of your EyEs,
(times uncrossable dessert of scorching hours).
your mouth the oasis of my soul,,,,your tounge
a liquid fire .................drunk with life ,,, above
the shimmering bow of rain........your spine.
and i........................................................................a lost puppy
at the window of yourheart.

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Queen
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Re: your skin -that far away mystery

Post by Queen » Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:41 am

keep playing with punctuation. i know some people don't get it right now, when they read your work but some of the best poetry is composed of wordplay and odd punctuation! :thumbsup:
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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