Unconditionally

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C.R. Ebowski
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Unconditionally

Post by C.R. Ebowski » Mon Jun 15, 2009 6:52 pm

I give all to you
Truth unrecognized
Emotions raw
Exposed feelings
But still you hide
Haunted by a past
Unforgivable
Frustration flares
When you’re blinded
All that I sacrifice
Just to be here
Yet I understand
Sacrifices are made
A life dreamed
Vanishes before you
But I stand before you
A shoulder to lean
A cradle to fall in
One that loves
Regardless of faults
Unconditionally
"Nobody can get the truth out of me because even I don't know what it is. I keep myself in a constant state of utter confusion."
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Re: Unconditionally

Post by heinzs » Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:45 pm

That is the point of unconditionality... it is sacrifice without the expectation of return or recognition. Well written.

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C.R. Ebowski
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Re: Unconditionally

Post by C.R. Ebowski » Sun Jun 21, 2009 5:02 pm

thankx heinzs :grin:
"Nobody can get the truth out of me because even I don't know what it is. I keep myself in a constant state of utter confusion."
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Re: Unconditionally

Post by Jetz » Sat Jun 27, 2009 7:47 pm

Unconditional love works great, as long as both parties involved feel the same. Seldom is that the case, in my experience. Certainly the thing that poems are written about though. Nice write.

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Re: Unconditionally

Post by C.R. Ebowski » Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:31 pm

same here....appreciated
"Nobody can get the truth out of me because even I don't know what it is. I keep myself in a constant state of utter confusion."
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