time to die

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hope1994
Clearwater Poet
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time to die

Post by hope1994 » Mon May 02, 2011 3:49 pm

Your in an old town
You think your alone
But then the wind blows and
A man appears out of thin air
Suddenly he shoots you and now
You see them circle around your body
You are one of them now you see them stab you
And stab you you say 'Stop' they turn and look they
Charge but then poof you are gone your home
You think your safe but then poof your back in the town they
Kill you again and now you are truly one of the dead there is no turning back now
Last edited by hope1994 on Tue May 03, 2011 4:19 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: time to die

Post by heinzs » Mon May 02, 2011 4:53 pm

Reads like a terrific dream...

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hope1994
Clearwater Poet
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Joined: Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:16 pm
Tag line: Stay strong
Location: Washington

Re: time to die

Post by hope1994 » Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:19 pm

thanks my friends and I were making up stories and I came up with this one and I thought it was poetic and so I put it on poetry pages and I was surprised with the response
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