With the Wind

The Ravyn · Post by **The Ravyn** » Sun Apr 11, 2004 3:32 pm

Life burns as a fire
consuming that which holds it
sometimes the flames burn high
other times only dimly glowing coals
until all that is left is grey ash
blowing away with the wind

Post by **thief of dreams** » Sun Apr 11, 2004 5:18 pm

have i read this before? seems familiar to me.. cause i remember loving the last two lines.. hehe.. still do too..

TheHumanoid · Post by **TheHumanoid** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 1:54 pm

I love the concept of being destroyed by the elements, it makes death seem more natural, comfortable. good job.

The Ravyn · Post by **The Ravyn** » Tue Apr 13, 2004 8:16 pm

thanx noid! ;o) thank you too terry ... and yes ... i wrote this about 6 years ago

Post by **thief of dreams** » Sun Sep 12, 2004 4:31 pm

Debbie · Post by **Debbie** » Sat Apr 30, 2005 7:10 am

This truly a good discription of life
for many it is truly like this.

She sure knew what she was talking about ..

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