Eternity

The Ravyn · Post by **The Ravyn** » Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:59 am

'til death, my love
isn't that what they say?
you and i, love
shall we let a little thing
like death come between us?
no, i think not
after all, death comes so soon
and we have
eternity

Post by **bags123** » Sat Feb 14, 2004 7:24 am

This is great Rayvn! Well put and short like life, but not love.

jenntwelve · Post by **jenntwelve** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 5:55 pm

I like the idea of love outlasting death, and being able to still be in it. Very nice.

JukotoxKanashimi · Post by **JukotoxKanashimi** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:02 pm

well put and short but still it carries a brillian message love can last long after death. They shoudl change the wedding vows...

Post by **thief of dreams** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:06 pm

we love into death, we love with a heart that carries past death into eternity.. but sometimes that love we fel so strongly about can walk out the open door, leaving nothing but wind scattered leaves to enter our hearts and steal the warmth from our lives as they lay frozen and brittle upon the hardwood floor of our lives...

KillerFox81 · Post by **KillerFox81** » Wed Feb 18, 2004 9:36 pm

Ravyn this was a great write and thief, that was very eloquently stated on your part. Love is bar none of of the greatest emotions in existence and when it leaves it takes a piece of you so great that it can leave physical pain

. But you'd risk it all just for a second of it...

Post by **thief of dreams** » Mon Mar 08, 2004 9:39 pm

buttterflies · Post by **buttterflies** » Mon Mar 08, 2004 10:09 pm

love hurts

i hurt
because love hurts

....beautiful poem, ravyn...

Post by **thief of dreams** » Wed May 19, 2004 9:59 pm

and so eternity begins... i know your schedule will be full with watching over Lisa and the girls now Jenn.. but one of these nights when im out wandering around the lake at night, come and say hello... Love you Jenn...

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