Toxic Tinkerbelle

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The Ravyn
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Toxic Tinkerbelle

Post by The Ravyn » Fri Jan 09, 2004 10:06 am

can i hold it all together
for just a little while longer?
watch the world spin crazily
as my heart leaps out of my skin

fairie dusted tales of youth
coming back to haunt me now
tiny wings beating against my mind
neverland waits for me

i must have made a wrong turn
past that second star
for as i went straight on
morning never came again
take my hand if you don't know where you're goin' ... i'll understand .... i've lost the way myself ...
j. kaye

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Post by JadedHopes » Fri Jan 09, 2004 12:54 pm

Great imagery. I absolutely loved this.

i must have made a wrong turn
past that second star
for as i went straight on
morning never came again

I love how you intertwined everything.. :)
no limits. just edges. - Jackson Pollack
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Post by thief of dreams » Sat Jul 03, 2004 6:35 pm

:bump:
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche
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Post by Bethany » Sat Jul 03, 2004 9:31 pm

You described this so well.. I actually imagined what you were stating. :bump:
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Post by moonflower » Sat Jul 03, 2004 11:17 pm

she wrote this so beautifully..makes me cry for the loss of her..its so not fair that she had to die..her words and her spirit live on
glad this one was bumped..i hadnt read it before now.. :crying:
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