Wish A Wander (Pantoum)

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midnight_kitty_kat
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Wish A Wander (Pantoum)

Post by midnight_kitty_kat » Wed Sep 28, 2016 10:38 am

Not all who wonder are lost.
Through waves of ticking time
fascination remains companion,
to my heart, no truer guide.

Through waves of ticking time
a wish I will wish.
To my heart, my true guide:
seek always what you fear.

A wish I will wish.
For those who don't wander,
seek always what you fear.
Wish a wander of your own.

You...who don't wander...
not all who wander are lost.
Wish a wander of your own.
Fascination remains companion.
“I am thrilled to be alive at time when humanity is pushing against the limits of understanding. Even better, we may eventually discover that there are no limits.”
― Richard Dawkins

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Re: Wish A Wander (Pantoum)

Post by heinzs » Mon Oct 10, 2016 7:10 pm

Good modification of traditional Pantoum... works very well!

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