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poeticpiers reborn
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Coast Guardians.

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:28 pm

Coast Guardians.

Muzdawidi.

There is no place I’d rather be.
Than here where I can watch the sea.
Which ebbs and flows continually.

The beach that forms the boundary
and seperates the land and sea.
Is prone to change erratically.

I know the changes I can see
Last only temporarily.
Until the next tide probably.

Most changes only transient.
They’re very rarely permanent.
A fact that’s clearly evident.

To those of us who watch the sea
and check the shoreline carefully.
For any changes there might be.

Which give rise to apprehension.
Warranting closer inspection
and if need be intervention.

Our aim to keep the boundary
that lies between the land and sea
Completely safe and hazard free.

Wednesday, 17 October 2012.

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Re: Coast Guardians.

Post by heinzs » Sun Nov 11, 2012 11:02 am

Trips lightly off the tongue. Monorhymes can be a real "pain". I tend to shy away from trying them... lol.

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