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Post by poeticpiers reborn » Mon Oct 15, 2012 1:02 pm

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Rondeau prime.

Some half forgotten memories.
Rise to the surface of my mind
Unbidden and not always kind.
Though some are guaranteed to please.
Because of feelings they release.
Of opportunities declined
Some half forgotten.

Long repressed feelings of unease
Vague fears of something ill defined
Perhaps we feared that we might find
Only unfulfilled dreams of peace.
Some half forgotten.

Monday, 15 October 2012

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Post by bags123 » Mon Oct 15, 2012 1:07 pm

Wow,...I've never heard of the form before. I love what you've done with it. :cheers:
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Post by LadySaturn » Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:20 am

Ooh, this is something unique.. I like it. :hello:

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Post by poeticpiers reborn » Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:02 pm

I am going through my source books my brain needs the exercise.Looking for forms I have not tried before.

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