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Insomniacs Complaint

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:52 am

Insomniacs Complaint.

Rondel

I take a pill to help me sleep.
I take another when I wake
To me the cost is rather steep
I got addicted by mistake.
Although I had tries counting sheep
It didn’t work I lay awake.
I take a pill to help me sleep
I take another when I wake.
From the first my sleep was deep
I found it difficult to wake.
Due to the pill I chose to take.
I still do though it’s not cheap
I take a pill to help me sleep.

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Re: Insomniacs Complaint

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 18, 2011 1:42 pm

Once we start this it becomes an unending cycle.

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